Tam shared with me this title from a report written by a fellow student in her environmental science class:
"Denver Traffic and it's affects on the Environment"
This is a pretty impressive one, worthy of my hometown newspaper. Of course, the author neglected to place a comma between "Traffic" and "and," but a solid effort nonetheless. (And extra points for the lower-case "affects.")
I am almost sad that my dad is no longer teaching middle school English and will not be able to present this brilliant example to his students.
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"it's" should not have the apostrophe. Also, affects is improperly used here. It should be effects.
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